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Saturday, September 29, 2012

Writing an Essay


Program Area Adult Basic Ed. Adult Secondary Ed./GED

Name of the lesson: Writing an Organized Essay


Brief description:
This lesson is designed to introduce the 4 paragraph essay to students. They will learn the necessary techniques needed to formulate and write a good essay as needed for the GED. Students will also learn
 

Developed by: Pam Cannon

Number of sessions needed: 1
Time required for each lesson: 1.5 hours
Setting: Classroom Computer lab
Instructional level:  CASAS Level 3 through 6

OBJECTIVES :  Lesson goal based on student need
 

Review will be done on the basic overall design of each paragraph and how to appropriately develop each one. For those students need in more assistance they will be given the opportunity to review on MHC Interactive Writing.

The student will be able to:  Students will be able to create an effective essay with a minimum of four well written paragraphs. These essays will have an introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion.
 

CASAS Competencies: 0.1 Communicate in interpersonal interactions
0.2.3 Interpret or write a personal note, invitation, or letter
0.2.4 Converse about daily and leisure activities and personal
interests
7.1 Identify or practice effective organizational and time
management skills in accomplishing goals
7.1.1 Identify and prioritize personal, educational, and workplace
goals (see also 4.4.5)
7.1.2 Demonstrate an organized approach to achieving goals,
including identifying and prioritizing tasks and setting and
following an effective schedule
7.1.3 Demonstrate personal responsibility and motivation in
accomplishing goals
7.2 Demonstrate ability to use thinking skills
7.2.1 Identify and paraphrase pertinent information
7.2.2 Analyze a situation, statement, or process, identifying
component elements and causal and part/whole
relationships
7.2.3 Make comparisons, differentiating among, sorting, and
classifying items, information, or ideas
7.2.4 Identify or make inferences through inductive and
deductive reasoning to hypothesize, predict, conclude, and
synthesize; distinguish fact from opinion, and determine
what is mandatory and what is discretionary
7.2.5 Evaluate a situation, statement, or process, assembling
information and providing evidence, making judgements,
examining assumptions, and identifying contradictions
7.2.6 Generate ideas using divergent (brainstorming) and
convergent (focus) approaches, and also through creative
imagination
7.2.7 Identify factors involved in making decisions, including
considering goals, constraints, and consequences, and
weighing alternatives
7.3.4 Utilize problem solving strategies, such as breaking down
the problem into component parts and generating
alternative or creative solutions
7.4.1 Identify or utilize effective study strategies
7.4.2 Take notes or write a summary or an outline

RESOURCES LIST EACH ITEM DESCRIBE HOW EACH ITEM IS USED IN THE LESSON
 

Writing Packet Handout GED Scoring Matrix
Contemporarys GED Language Arts, Writing Text
 

Text pages: Chapter 4 & Chapter 8
 

Notes to the teacher:
 

LESSON PLAN STEPS
 

1. WARM-UP/REVIEW
 

Duration: 10 minutes
 

Activity: Explain that on the GED students will be given a prompt to write about. We have no way of knowing what the topic will be, but they must write about that topic they have now options.
 

2. INTRODUCTION
Duration: 10 minutes

Activities:
 

Hand out the writing packet. Start by reviewing what a four paragraph essay is and what is required. Next, explain the scoring matrix, explain how each of the five areas are scored from 1 to 4. With 4 being the best, but all five areas must be scored individually. Walk the students through a sample
scoring process in all five areas. Then explain that once all the areas are scored the numbers are added together and divided by 5 to get an
average score and that score combined with the score received on the writing essay will give them an over all score on the test.
 

3. PRESENTATION
 

Duration 45 minutes
 

Skill(s) that will be presented: Listening, Reading, Writing
 

Steps in the presentation: After the review of the process to score an essay the students are to be allowed to review the sample essays in their writing packet. Explain that they are to write like the essay that scored a 3. That is the score they need to try to get on their assignments and on the GED. Instruct students that after they have written their essay the should read it and compare it to the 3. Also, students should
score their own essay after they have written it. This will help them to evaluate their own essays and determine if they need additional work or not.
 

4. PRACTICE
 

Duration: n/a minutes
Grouping: Individual
Description of activity: Homework assignment to write an essay using the information obtained from the Goal Setting Activity. This essay will be due in 2 class periods.
 

5. EVALUATION
Duration n/a minutes
Objective (from Step 2)Students will be able to create an effective essay with a minimum of four well  written paragraphs. These essay will have and introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion.
 

Type of Assessment(s) Written Sample 
Demonstration Other, Description:   Students will turn in a written essay
 

Student Reflection Activity:  Students will evaluate their own essay and determine what errors have been made and what they could do to improve their paper in order to get a higher grade.  Students will then rewrite their essay with these corrections on them.

6. APPLICATION AND EXTENSION:  Students will continue to write essays on given topics, however they will expand their writing topics to other areas of writing styles


Outside classroom:  Students will continue to write essays as homework assignments

GED Writing Scring Rubric

1 comment:

  1. This should be a very interesting subject to teach utilizing wiki technology as it seemingly fits into one of West&West's wiki scenarios well. Will the students do their writing exercises with pen/paper or online or both? Also, will students form writing support groups around the learning activities?

    I especially like the effort of discussing the scoring matrix with the students and walking them through a sample scoring process. That way, students will know exactly what they are expected to include in a standard essay.

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